How many roads did I pass,
my partings always too short and to a point,
with ubiquitous hostility?
I still risk a crossing on occasion,
in muddy boots and what suits that particular day;
always fitting, but not in fashion, I'm afraid.
Out in this no man's land,
trust is too rich a luxury for most.
'Nobody is about for nothing', although I am, usually.
It's this random motivation that disturbs, I think,
and draws curious looks from passing cars,
all full up and striking out on trivial campaigns.
I long for sand and surf, or subtly sloping mountains,
although plain farmland will do (at a push).
At dusk, I plod back.
The Town in the Tall Grass
Li walked with his head bent forward, so that all he could see was the ground beneath his feet. He had sensitive eyes, and the harsh evening sun blinded him every time he tried to look straight ahead.
His map showed a string of villages along this road, but so far he had come across nothing but mile after mile of tall, wild grass. He plodded on resolutely anyway.
There was a mountain range on the horizon, and as the sun slowly disappeared behind one of the taller peaks, Li was startled by a bright flash of light in front of him. He looked up sharply, squinting against the glare
If Dannie had a mouth, he might have been yelling something. Lacking a corporeal body, he chose instead to repeat a string of swear words over and over to himself. The star system he had so enthusiastically thrown himself into was slightly more complicated than he thought, and he found himself dodging gravity wells on all sides.
Although, 'dodging' wouldn't be the most appropriate word to use. Like a marble rolled along a rippled beach, Dannie tended to move along the dips and curves in space-time made by whatever celestial bodies happened to be nearby. He did have some control over where he went, but it was the kind of control that depen
If Dannie had a mouth, he might have been yelling something. Lacking a corporeal body, he chose instead to repeat a string of swear words over and over to himself. The star system he had so enthusiastically thrown himself into was slightly more complicated than he thought, and he found himself dodging gravity wells on all sides.
Although, 'dodging' wouldn't be the most appropriate word to use. Like a marble rolled along a rippled beach, Dannie tended to move along the dips and curves in space-time made by whatever celestial bodies happened to be nearby. He did have some control over where he went, but it was the kind of control that depen
The Town in the Tall Grass
Li walked with his head bent forward, so that all he could see was the ground beneath his feet. He had sensitive eyes, and the harsh evening sun blinded him every time he tried to look straight ahead.
His map showed a string of villages along this road, but so far he had come across nothing but mile after mile of tall, wild grass. He plodded on resolutely anyway.
There was a mountain range on the horizon, and as the sun slowly disappeared behind one of the taller peaks, Li was startled by a bright flash of light in front of him. He looked up sharply, squinting against the glare
Punctuating Dialogue: A Guide by WordCount, literature
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Punctuating Dialogue: A Guide
Standard Punctuation: Dialogue
Sometimes we read dialogue so often, punctuated in so many different ways, that we either forget what we've learned (if that was anything memorable to begin with) or we rely on instinct to guide us. A common example of this can be seen in the opening dialogue of darksouldream's piece, Bobby:
No, replied Cindy `I think his sister Becky is staying with her, but she keeps muttering about parents out living children. The doctors been keeping her pretty sedated.
Most Americans will cringe at this. Why? Well, double quotation marks are the more acceptable usage (th
Man, it's been a long time since I updated this :/
I'm working full time now as well as attempting to write a novel, so I really haven't had time to think of much else. Travelling to and from the place I work is exhausting and time-consuming, so I'll probably be looking for somewhere more convenient in the near future. Until then, though, I've got zero free time.
I checked my messages this morning to find that I won something in lovetodeviate (https://www.deviantart.com/lovetodeviate)'s Lit Crit Contest, which was great. I've never won anything like that before! Thanks to all the judges who liked my crit.
I see that I had a word count thing going on the last time I posted here
So, I've been keeping two copies of my novel-in-progress; one as a 'main', and the other as a backup that I update at the end of the day.
On Wednesday, I accidentally deleted the main rather than backup, losing several thousand words in the process. This explains why there's a gap in the story with a big [FILL THIS IN LATER] where a pivotal scene should be.
I've always been encrypting the main file, because I'm paranoid and don't like people snooping around my files (and am currently doing a lot of my writing on someone else's laptop). Something went a bit screwy with the encryption program yesterday, the end result being that every time I
There's a secret method of getting lynched that will work for absolutely anyone (as long as you're Irish). Want to know what it is?
Say that you think England is roughly 10,0000 times better than Ireland in every conceivable way.
Anyway, I'm back in the land of Eire, where our delightfully insane climate is currently having a brief spate of 'late spring'. Tomorrow we're in for some torrential rain, though, so I guess that evens things out.
I've been hard at work on a novel, so I haven't done anything for dA. I probably won't until I need a break from it.
However, I will be keeping a handy little counter on my journal to say what my curren
Hello! I wanted to take a minute to thank you for your wonderfully detailed and well-considered critique of Averted. Your points are solid; lots of "why didn't I think of that" stuff. Thanks for spending so much time on my story, it helps a lot. I'm actually looking forward to re-drafting this one!
Lol, I'm one of those awful people then. I blame your username. Anything that ends with 'a' or 'i' sounds female to me. Maybe I blame my Indianness more. Sorry!